Comment 64220
Comment ID 64220
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Okay, maybe I do have one suggestion 
The wing on the farthest side looks a bit off. I see it coming behind him and in front of it. Maybe if you got rid of the feathers coming behind, it will look like it's not being divided so much.
See the wing in the foreground? It doesn't really dip that low.
Just a thought
The wing on the farthest side looks a bit off. I see it coming behind him and in front of it. Maybe if you got rid of the feathers coming behind, it will look like it's not being divided so much.
See the wing in the foreground? It doesn't really dip that low.
Just a thought
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