Comment 68169

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pazazz
Apr 4, 2008, 7:53:04 PM UTC
She seem like a lovely character. Her proportions are way off. Her head is way too big for her body or her body is way too small for her head. Her elbows should hit at her waist and they appear to be up too high. There are many really good tutorials on proportion available on-line that may be of some help to you. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Comment ID 68169

[Art] Elf Girl
2425
Apr 5, 2008, 6:06:02 AM UTC on [Art] Elf Girl
Thank you greatly! That's really the thing I guessed but wasn't sure. It seems that her neck is too long and I should do something with her hair. Is it so?

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  • pazazz
    Apr 5, 2008, 10:16:10 AM UTC
    Her neck is a bit long, but overall the head needs to be smaller too. Her hair is not bad, if you want to change it out, that would be your choice. I look forward to seeing her done again. Smile
    • 2425
      Apr 6, 2008, 8:37:31 AM UTC
      Thanks! I'll try to do my best!