Hello! I like this one. There is a lot of form and balance here. The only problem is the different tones in the ink (which all ink users experience at some stage). Just keep practicing and it will eventually become perfect. I am now collecting my works to put on to paper demon. I have to scan them at Lulu's. I have an idea for you. You should try the same style but continue to play with different medias such as paint and sketch pen. I can show you proper smudging if you like Bye!!
thanks ^_^. and yeah..i noticed the tone difference to...but it this the 1st one i've ever done so i have an excuse! lol. don't worry i'm going to continue to practice! hopefully ill become better
thats for the critique!
Well done with it. I like it, you have done well.