Comment 93545

The way you did her hair is great, the lighting brings out the beautiful flow of it. The way the coat flows is off though, the air rushing up would cause it to balloon up and raise straight up, not to the back- though this is an idealized version of the scene, so it makes sense why it isn't. Her face came out well, it has a lot of personality in it. The piece doesn't quite give off the falling feel though, but I'm not sure how to fix that. Great piece!