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littledisneyhobbit
Jun 3, 2016, 9:26:19 PM | 1 min read

Tw: Suicide

I’m rewritting one of my old characters changing his past, life, everything I’m not even done with chapter one yet and already I can tell I need help on this so does anyone want to be my beta reader and tell me what the heck is off about it? becuse I feel like I’m missing somthing but can’t make my brain ask me the questions I need to