Schrodinger Salute: sketch

Posted Apr 29, 2007, 4:57:16 AM UTC

Inked outline of Schrodinger from Hellsing...

Something feels weird about it though. Can anyone help me point it out? D:

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bloodysmurf
Apr 29, 2007, 7:23:49 AM UTC
I did what I think would make it look better. Im not sure if itll help at all, but I hope it does XD
The problem was in the torso, it was twisted oddly for the position of the legs, I believe. And the right shoulder needed some sort of indentation b/c the neck and shoulder dont immediately connect.(You can ignore the left shoulder, if youd like, it was just a guide line for me XD)
I think this is looking good! Im looking forward to see it colored! ^_^
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- Nakiechef
  Apr 29, 2007, 10:48:41 AM UTC
  Yeah, that seems to make sense. Thanks for the advice!
  8D
  -scurries off to make changes-
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  bloodysmurf
  Apr 29, 2007, 12:40:52 PM UTC
  XD No problem ^_^
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