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Hmm...very nice. I like it Grin

"...Then he used his fight money to buy two of every animal and put them on a boat and beat the crap out of them! And from that point forward any time a bunch of animals were together it's called a 'Zoo'!"

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Interesting. I myself have never been a fan of free-verse, but I promised I'd review and I don't like going back on my word. It's nicely written, it just isn't appealing to me. Smile If you follow me.

Pacman . . . . . . . . . . Blinky

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