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I saw your post in the forum and came over to look at your story. Unfortunately, for me: the starting of the summary sounds good... UNTIL "Bulma", and after seeing Dragon Ball Z in the category, my feeling for the story became "whatever...". Sorry, I'm not very cut out for fanfic. Though, you have good skills and passion, why not try them out on ORGINAL stories?

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