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Very good start. It needs a slight read-over for flow and a few typos, but you're doing great ^.^ I like it a lot and can't wait to see more.

"Notice: Persons attempting to find a motive in this narrative will be prosecuted; persons attempting to find a moral in it will be banished; person attempting to find a plot in it will be shot." ~ Mark Twain

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