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wonderful poem, i liked the description you used in the poem, very nice ^^

i stare at light that makes me blind internally there's nothing left for me to be i'm here alone and isolated

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Well Written, I think it beautifully expresses the significance of meaning ,purpose and its affect on life. Questions which plague all of us at one point or ther in our lives. Looking forward to more works.

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A very disturbing piece of literature but also very well done. The mood and insight into this mind is both disturbing and intriguing.
Those last two lines give me the chills.

I don't sleep. I despise those little slices of death.

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Oh my God, Nae, that is BEAUTIFUL!!! I love your use of words to describe your inner torments. You have a great talent in writing. Take that and run with it girl. I give you a standing ovation for this one.

Laughter is the best medicine and your face is curing the world.

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