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I broke laughing when i read how they stole the bank and tried to stole the store XD lol jajajaja and how goku transport him to vegeta just to let him feel the kick of their baby XD

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What bag?

Bwahaha, that's priceless Corky Smile

"I like hearing myself talk. It is one of my greatest pleasures. I often
have long conversations with myself, and I am so clever that sometimes I don't understand a single word of what I am saying."
- Oscar Wilde

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I still love this story, I read it on your main site but I'm glad I found it here too! It was great!!!

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