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Dyami
Ooh!!! me like! please finish it or at least update it! can't wait to see how this story develops!
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(PS, hate to be negative but it's kind of... choppy?
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MoonDemon
It sounds intriguing so far. I'd like to see where you go with this before I make a real comment though. I'll be checking for updates.
THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!!
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