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1: Prologue + small part chapter one
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Ooh!!! me like! please finish it or at least update it! can't wait to see how this story develops!
(PS, hate to be negative but it's kind of... choppy? )
09:21AM, Apr 3, 2006 GMT
It sounds intriguing so far. I'd like to see where you go with this before I make a real comment though. I'll be checking for updates.
THIS TOO SHALL PASS!!!
12:21PM, Nov 8, 2005 GMT
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