Unfinished Fighting Stance

Posted Jan 20, 2006, 9:24:57 AM UTC

Not exactly a sketch as much as a picture I didn't finish. Once again, the scanner chomped off a major part of the paper ~_~; The only reason I can think for posting this picture is this - I need to learn poses other than fighting ones. Any suggestions?

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860
Mar 26, 2006, 11:18:06 AM UTC
You could use to add maybe, joint bends. Her/his arms and legs look kinda noodley, once again for lack of better term. There are creases in the elbows and knees that need to be shown, or else you get that noodle thing. ^.~
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- eegirlee
  Mar 29, 2006, 2:13:50 AM UTC
  I'm really getting grilled by people on this pic- ~ ~; Anywho, creases, add um, gotcha! ..., ..., ..., ^ ^; Um, how do you do that again?
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  860
  Mar 29, 2006, 2:54:30 AM UTC
  Gah, I don't know how to explain it. I will show you sometime.
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BogusRed
Jan 25, 2006, 1:25:06 AM UTC
Here I can again see the hard pressure with the pencil so just lighten up there and don't put down firm lines until you are sure they are correct. One trick to check your art is to look at it in a mirror. Seeing it flipped helps us to see our artwork with fresh eyes.
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- eegirlee
  Mar 3, 2006, 6:49:05 AM UTC
  Thanks for the tip! ^ ^
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ArkillianDragon
Jan 24, 2006, 10:25:06 PM UTC
There isn't much to comment on. What is the person fighting? That makes a huge difference
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- eegirlee
  Mar 3, 2006, 6:25:28 AM UTC
  It never occured to me to actually draw Harmakhis fighting anybody... I know she WILL in my story, but never thought about drawing it... *smacks self on head* Thanks so much! ^ ^
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