Unexpected Outcome

Posted Oct 30, 2022, 5:29:07 PM UTC

All it takes is an unlatched door.
A single latch.

All it takes is one mistake for it all to fail.
All that he accomplished in this life, and yet to accomplish
All for it to meet a cruel end on concrete floor.

Luis didn't think it would happen to him, couldn't happen to him.
He was too careful, too attentive to the incompetencies of his fellows.
One moment of lapsed attention for him to lean against that unlatched door.
And fall.

And yet, it didn't.
Through sheer willpower alone, he survived. Magic. Earth magic, to be exact.

He always knew he was meant for something greater.

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  • Aug 24, 2023, 2:23:13 PM UTC
    This is soooo good!!!!
  • Nov 16, 2022, 6:11:51 PM UTC
    Mozza has mix feeling...she happy Luis okay but on the other paw....
    (Mozza hover in the background cover in bandage so she has on one hand to wrap up the hurt Luis)
    .....I think she dreaming of an burrito Luis, like an spicy burrito but it burn your ears Tongue
  • Oct 30, 2022, 11:31:36 PM UTC
    Okay that has to be the COOLEST backstory for the latent element challenge, this is amazing, my dude!!
    • Oct 31, 2022, 11:55:00 AM UTC
      Thanks I appreciate it! Grin

      First time ever making a webcomic, but definitely fun practice

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