Tazia

Posted Dec 23, 2022, 12:42:46 AM UTC

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  • Dec 23, 2022, 1:28:51 AM UTC
    I really like this character design!

    Something I really appreciate about the artwork is how vibrant and engaging the color choices are, they really draw the eye to the character and infuse a lot of life.
    What i feel could be improved on is the posing, while I like that the character feels balanced and grounded, the actual pose is straight-on and mostly symmetrical which can make it harder to add attitude into your characters. Consider pushing the hips and shoulders more, and separating the feet so that the pose isn't perfectly straight on.
    Other than that, I feel that the hand on the hip may be inverted, as usually the thumb is facing back, and the other arm likely should be a bit longer, as our arms usually end around mid-way through the thigh. Finally, traditionally, human torsos are just under half the length of their legs, whereas it appears closer to 1:1 in your drawing, though this could definitely be intentional in the cases of races such as Dwarves.
    All that being said, I really love how you shaded and rendered it, especially the face- the nose and lips are rendered in such a way where the 3-dimensionality is really clear, and I love the background offering an extra flair of energy.
    • Dec 23, 2022, 2:25:32 AM UTC
      Hi Elliot! Thanks for your comment, I suppose it's important to note that my character isn't human, she is a gnome and her proportions are meant to reflect that! This is also meant to be a sort of character reference for me to use in future pieces rather than a stand alone type of work so I didn't want to use a dynamic pose here, I am still figuring out how to use the site as well so it's a great test piece to use! I appreciate your feedback very much!
      • Dec 23, 2022, 2:39:41 AM UTC
        That's very fair! Thanks for the clarifications (I'm also very new) in that case I totally retract my remark about torso-to leg ratios; Either way it's a great drawing and I can't wait to see more art of this character ^^

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