Elsbeth's First Battle

that poor slime but on another note.I do like the pose and how you have them looking at each other but there is no lighting from the fire. This is an easy fix you can do by taking the outline color of the fire slightly grabbing a lighter color and blending it on the rim of where the light would hit. You can also blend in the color pencils for a smoother finish or you can experiment with different paper types!