Comment 141522
Comment ID 141522
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Ahh you drew a picture too, a double treat! ^v^
I find it interesting that you chose to write it from William's perspective - it makes Apirka's actions seem more surprising since we don't know what's going through her mind (especially at the end... wonder how to describe what she's thinking there, hahaa). Fun stuff, nice work
I find it interesting that you chose to write it from William's perspective - it makes Apirka's actions seem more surprising since we don't know what's going through her mind (especially at the end... wonder how to describe what she's thinking there, hahaa). Fun stuff, nice work
Is this a good thing, though? XDD I'm sorry, my brain's just, "BUT DID IT MAKE SENSE, SHIRO?! DOES SKITTLES LOVE IT?!?!" It's very aggressive with me. XP
It is absolutely a good thing!! ^v^ (And my brain does that too, just yelling thoughts at me when I'm trying to calmly assess a statement hehh-- )
But thank you. ^w^ I appreciate you addressing my brain's goofiness.