Comment 18706

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AnimeBoyToyKoibito
Nov 14, 2005, 1:49:33 PM UTC
This look slovely dear. Big Smile If I would have anything to say, it would be to make it so the symbol of the "S" Was curved in a bit under the breasts to make it look like the shirt is slightly tilted. Hmmm... the hand on her hip seems just a tad bit too small, but that can be easily fixed. Grin The little boy looks awesome, his pose is great!! But he has no face!! Poor thing. Laughing Try to think out the cape a bit too, so that it doesn't seem so stiff. And then it will look flawless!!!

You really should post more of your work, you are a great artist!! I send me Kudos to you!!

Comment ID 18706

[Art] SuperMommy
MoonDemon
Nov 14, 2005, 2:37:49 PM UTC on [Art] SuperMommy
Embarrassed thank you for the compliment!!! babyboy doesn't have a face because I'm not sure if just how I want it as I said in the discription. Once I take in some more tips (like what you said about the hand and S shirt, LOL) I'm going to redraw them and try to color them in on the puter. OMG, I'm neversous just thinking about that, LOL. Anyway I put the cape in for a refrence to myself cause it's how the kid sees his mom I'll get it looking better, I hope, in the finished product. THANKYOU SOOOOO MUCH for the critiquey-thingy, LOL.

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