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First things first... I think you are doing wonderful so far. I like that you gave each character their own "look." Alot of the time, an artist will tend to give the characters the same facial attributes making them all look the same in one way or another. Personally, I think the girls with their legs up look okay. I think the main problem you are having is that their faces are a bit smaller than their body frames. With the men, I think that if you give them longer necks, that will help balance them out a bit. You drew them having broad shoulders and they have hardly any neck. So by just adding a longer neck, it will help with them. For the women, one thing I have noticed is that alot of their breasts are angling out to their armpits. If you give them more of a roundness on the chest portion,instead of just at the sides, it will help with that. I hope this helps you in some way luv. If you need any help, just let me know, okay? I am always here to help because I love it when people do that for me. Keep up the great work on this. I can't wait to see it when it is finished. All my love to you. Mwah! ^_^
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*sigh* I'm going to have to bust out a magazine or something for the boobs I was looking in a mirror and mine kinda look like that so that's how I drew them on my chicks. I HATE DRAWING DUDES!!! 
At least until I get the hang of it I do. I guess when I'm done with this I'll do a few dude pics to get the kinks worked out 
thanx dearest!! Any and all help is most needed 
At least until I get the hang of it I do. I guess when I'm done with this I'll do a few dude pics to get the kinks worked out thanx dearest!! Any and all help is most needed Replies
MissezNoll Again love, I am not the most perfect body artist, but if you would like to use any of my drawings for references feel free to. I have alot of nude ones in the Red Curtain if you want to use those. And don't get discouraged hun. You have done a marvelous job so far. Every great artist has to start somewhere. Just keep practicing and you'll get it. Even still I have problems getting boobs drawn right. Well keep up the awesome work. All my love. ^_^MoonDemon AAHHH I wouldn't get too discouraged just fustrated I'm enjoying drawing again even if I never make the great artist standard so that's what really counts *happy dance!*MoonDemon Hey babe, I made a few changes so check this out when ya get time, pretty please. I'll make you a new batch of cupcakes, LOLMissezNoll All right! I'll do anything for cupcakes.
Well.... almost anything. Have to be careful there. 
Anywhoo... that looks so much better love. ^_^ I can see the changes you made. The guys do look alot better and more in proportion and I see you took my advice about the girls' boobs. Heheh It does look better. Now another piece of helpful info... don't be afraid to darken their hair. What I usually do is darken the hair up considerably and then take the very edge of my eraser and lightly "brush" highlights into it. That gives it more of a realistic look. But, you said you are adding color to this, so maybe that won't be applicable here. Well it is looking wonderful. Keep up the great work. I'll be looking for this when it is all finished. By the way, the shading looks great so far. 
MoonDemon *Gives Kristy enough cupcakes to last till christmas* Yes I am adding color to this so that's why I'm trying not to go too dark with everything. I can't help myself I love bright colors. I'm going to do a few changes that Nicky (tennispirate) sugested then on to the coloring, YEEEEHAAAW!!!