Comment 22331
Comment ID 22331
![[Art] Lost in Music](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_img_thumb_4037_06e02ba9b633ad4a383b831f1d8238ad5ebf81610ddba.jpg)
Heey! I see you've got yourself a belly dancer! I see you're getting better at drawing characters. I like it, the way you have shown her caught in the music. Her expression came off really well. I hink maybe the head needs more work. Her chin should be sharper and it's supposed to edge in middle of her face, you got it a little askew. The head seems a bit too narrow and the ears should be a little lower.
I think it goes well with a Dead Can Dance song. I have one of their albums and I tend to dance along to some of their songs. There's one song in particular this pic reminds me of.
I don't have much else to advise you on, everybody else already told you what to do it seems. I can only add that it's not clear where exactly her legs are, because of the skirt, I think you should define where her legs are.
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"I may not live in a perfect world but I can create one on paper."
I think it goes well with a Dead Can Dance song. I have one of their albums and I tend to dance along to some of their songs. There's one song in particular this pic reminds me of.
I don't have much else to advise you on, everybody else already told you what to do it seems. I can only add that it's not clear where exactly her legs are, because of the skirt, I think you should define where her legs are.---
"I may not live in a perfect world but I can create one on paper."
The boys are better today, but they haven't reached their normal demon statis yet but they've reached small natural desaster statis so they are on their way to full recovery