Comment 23032

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Jan 17, 2006, 9:33:25 PM UTC

Ummm... I'm still trying to figure out what about her head doesn't quite feel right... I think her hair line is too high, and her hair goes too high- she doesn't seem to have bounce at the top, but its quite high. Her shoulder needs to go down at the back. Err... If you want me to tag it with a red line to show you what I mean, give me your e-mail, and I'll see what I can do

Comment ID 23032

Lilimayhem

Jan 18, 2006, 2:24:48 PM UTC on [Art] Me...Dangerous?

now that you mention it... you are absolutely right...it is too high, hairline and top of her hair, she looks a bit conehead!!!! As for the shoulder, yes, please, explain further...shoulder more down the back

i'll send you my e-mail by pm! Thanks for the critics, i appreciate as always!

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ArkillianDragon
Jan 18, 2006, 11:40:06 PM UTC
Sent you a tagged pic Hope it helps ^^;
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- Lilimayhem
  Jan 19, 2006, 6:56:46 AM UTC
  Oh yes it will. I still cant believe how beautiful she looked under your pen, yu gave her such a look.. Thanks again Susan!!!!!!!
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  ArkillianDragon
  Jan 24, 2006, 10:13:11 PM UTC
  Cheers All to help ^^ She was 90% there- I just gave her a few tweeks. I used mostly your lines for the red line *nods*
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  Lilimayhem
  Jan 25, 2006, 6:17:48 PM UTC
  Cant wait to work on her, among all my other drawings that are on stand by! School... Thanks again
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