I like the revised pic and I think you did an excellent job with the feeling of this drawing. I think we all get into a mood like that sometimes and this is a great rendition of it. Water color and charcoal huh? I've never heard of that combination before I might have to try it out because it's an awesome mixture!
well, it was an old drawing actually, that i did in charcoal. I was checking out my arts the other day and when i found this one, i decided to ruin it by playing around with watercolor and ink...When i want to ruin, turns out nice, when i want it to be nice i ruin it..Thanks Jill!