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I think 'bloodthirst' would be more suitable to call it. You know Lili, it perfectly describes your story 'My Dawn of the Dead'. I read it quite a while ago. It was really great actually, and this picture reminded me of it.
The face looks incredible, and I love her expression
, but I think her lips and eyes could do some shading, like a white in the eye where the light falls, and a shade on her lower lip. Otherwise it looks very good. The red and the blue in her eyes makes us be drawn to her. Well done!
The face looks incredible, and I love her expression, but I think her lips and eyes could do some shading, like a white in the eye where the light falls, and a shade on her lower lip. Otherwise it looks very good. The red and the blue in her eyes makes us be drawn to her. Well done!Comment ID 25355
![[Art] Thirst](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_img_thumb_4455_33ac580ce37779ec177ec4d55265935f5ec003f347090.jpg)
lol i hadnt thought of that. I think your right... About the story... its probably gonna stop there, i had another idea, i just dont know when i'll work on it. It would be, several Dawns of the dead. Like seeing different person live or die through their dawn...
Thanks a lot for the review. Glad you like her.
About the story... its probably gonna stop there, i had another idea, i just dont know when i'll work on it. It would be, several Dawns of the dead. Like seeing different person live or die through their dawn...Thanks a lot for the review.
Glad you like her.Replies
Humority I'd love to read more whenever it's ready and you're welcome!