Comment 28047

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ArkillianDragon
Mar 25, 2006, 9:07:00 PM UTC
Ahhhh- Dawn :3 Haven't seen any fan art of her before- never really figured out what she could do, but the guy who draws her is an absolute ledgend ^^

For advanced crit- her body isn't curving with her pelvic tilt. Her pelvis is tilted too much for her not to be curved around so her shoulders are above her hips again. Her legs are a little wide apart for the tilt angle too. Unless her character has gymnastic legs and can do the splits- its not too comfortable.

Comment ID 28047

[Art] Dawn - CyberGoddess
Perplexity
Mar 26, 2006, 6:07:28 AM UTC on [Art] Dawn - CyberGoddess
After scanning it in, the legs really bothered me, too Doh Maybe I go back and fix it... or maybe she just lives the rest of her life with a limp.Annoyed

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  • ArkillianDragon
    Mar 26, 2006, 10:14:01 PM UTC
    >Smile Go the limp!!! Naugh, if you want to fix it, it'll be worth it. Its a funny concept to 'let her limp' though! XD Never thought of it that way!! I can't imaginge what would happen if some of my characters could walk...