Comment 49799
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![[Art] Noap](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_img_thumb_10168_444f77a6d4f7dfd3ee7634dcc53e936e5ec04419cf383.jpg)
Thank you very much! I'll definitely work on bigger feet and proportions in general. The texture effects I decided to use since I never really had before, and I wanted to see how many different ways I could use them. But I completely understand what you mean by overusing them.
Again, thank you very much for the critique!
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BogusRed you're welcome
Glad to see you back around PD. So I see you are looking for a roasting, eh?
I think conceptually, this drawing works really well. It's very funny. I especially like the little dashed line around the missing soap.
There are a couple areas that could be improved upon though. Mainly the proportions of the figure. Now most people's hands are smaller than their feet. But this poor fellow has much smaller feet than hands.
When drawing, try starting out with a light sketch and make sure the proportions are working before moving onto the darker and heavier outlines.
I thought the patterns on the socks were a really cute touch. I'd avoid over use of the texture effects though.
Hope that helps