^^ She is a bit of a fanaticical person, isn't she? ^^ You have some beutiful contrasts in this. A suggestion with portaits and dark hair I've found- if you give wispy bits of hair, even thought the camera doesn't pic it up, it makes the subject less cut out looking. Nothing heavy- light wispy lines in the direction the hair is going. Don't join it to the rest of the hair though.