Comment 52659

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ArkillianDragon
Jun 25, 2007, 2:39:15 PM UTC
The only possible critique I could have it that the flow of this picture feels a little ridgid. It's a little difficult to explain- I'm not too good with scenery, but that's how it feels. Other than that, it's a pretty picture.

Comment ID 52659

[Art] Arizona Purple
Sliverbane
Jun 25, 2007, 7:49:03 PM UTC on [Art] Arizona Purple
Maybe it's the large amount of stone depicted. Thanks for the crit.

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  • ArkillianDragon
    Jun 25, 2007, 9:31:58 PM UTC
    Could be. IT's dominating, and I think the flow would work out more if it were zoomed out a bit ^^
    • Sliverbane
      Jun 26, 2007, 7:40:18 AM UTC
      That's what I thought when I finished this painting. About the rocks dominating the image. The reference photograph was the same. Bright blue sky and a big brown and red rock. When I turned this in my instructor liked it - I was surprised.
      • ArkillianDragon
        Jun 26, 2007, 1:17:35 PM UTC
        I'm not surprised, but some referance pictures aren't good to start off with. But in saying this, the mountain area is the subject and you can argue that it takes up enough room for that. Donno.