Comment 55397

Comment ID 55397

[Art] Standard Returns Policy
Eshkenazi
Aug 22, 2007, 6:38:17 PM UTC on [Art] Standard Returns Policy
Very nice work. Ir eally love the design of her corset as well as the markings on her face.

I wish the buildings to the back right were a little more refined. Right next to all the heavy shading in the rocks, they seem very stark and unfinished (which I know you said you wanted to still see the sketch--nevertheless, they don't seem to fit together well.)

I really love this though. Some very cool design work.

Replies

  • NoodleFred
    Aug 22, 2007, 7:00:04 PM UTC
    thank you for your advice! i agree they could use some more detail. part of this is because the drawing part didnt scan so well back there, and partly becuase i wanted it to look smoot like...i forget what the stuff is called...ha, but yeah i should have done a better job there.
    might go back and change things if i have time.
    thank ya!