Comment 58919

Comment ID 58919

[Art] Touch
Draith
Sep 23, 2007, 7:46:26 AM UTC on [Art] Touch
Their hair is excellent, a great amount of detail and good pose/movement.
The one on the right (sorry, I don't know the characters) has a wonderful expression, very nice use of lines and the eyes are really nice.
The left one's face seems a bit squished against the right, though, as even though his head is turned it looks flattened on the side towards the background.. especially compared to where the other one's face and head appear so 3D.
His face, however, is really well done, and I greatly enjoyed his eyes and the way you use small detail lines to better capture expressions. Corky Smile

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  • nyarlathotep23
    Sep 23, 2007, 8:06:04 AM UTC
    Yeah You're totally right. Hahaha This was basically a failed drawing (Trust me, what I cropped out in order to make this submission failed even harder. DX) I just liked how Roxas' expression came out so much I didn't just want to abandon the sketch so here it is, XD Axel's squashed face and all. hahaha. Thanks for the lovely compliments and crit dear!