Comment 59099
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I really love her calm and almost dream like expression, it fits serenity well. I really like how you did her bangs, they have a more realistic fell to them.
Crit:
You may have wanted to make her left hand a little larger and add a bit more of a angle to it so it looked more like it was sitting.
Very nice work over all, I love how you protraded her so keep up the great work.
Crit:
You may have wanted to make her left hand a little larger and add a bit more of a angle to it so it looked more like it was sitting.
Very nice work over all, I love how you protraded her so keep up the great work.
Comment ID 59099
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thank you very much for your kind and also critical comment. I know ..the hands 
the worst part of all...I have to practise a lot *g*
the worst part of all...I have to practise a lot *g*
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