Comment 61339
Comment ID 61339
![[Art] Esther and Ion](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_img_thumb_13307_4480d7902ff55d88f4e9f2f9352cff1c5ebf12c9800ec.jpg)
Not bad.
However, a few sticky points.
For instance, on the dress, the buttoned cloth overlay is too flat, laying over her chest like it's skin-tight -- the breasts shouldn't be in such stark relief against the rest of her body, given the voluminous nature of her clothing. Also, the eyes seem a bit too far apart, and the nose and mouth on the lady are too small, not to mention that her waist is far too thin -- it gives her an unnatural-looking, wasp-like figure.
Otherwise, as I said, not bad. Shows some promise, provided you put in some hard work.
However, a few sticky points.
For instance, on the dress, the buttoned cloth overlay is too flat, laying over her chest like it's skin-tight -- the breasts shouldn't be in such stark relief against the rest of her body, given the voluminous nature of her clothing. Also, the eyes seem a bit too far apart, and the nose and mouth on the lady are too small, not to mention that her waist is far too thin -- it gives her an unnatural-looking, wasp-like figure.
Otherwise, as I said, not bad. Shows some promise, provided you put in some hard work.
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