Comment 63763

Comment ID 63763

[Art] Fall
ArkillianDragon
Dec 23, 2007, 5:38:27 AM UTC on [Art] Fall
Yeah- they do feel very distant here. She's not even looking at him Sad What's happening with his top? It looks half off or something- I'm not sure how it's meant to sit ^^;

Replies

  • Vladora
    Dec 23, 2007, 8:20:42 PM UTC
    Hehe, she's supposed to be looking at him, I'm just ve-ery bad at eye contact.

    His clothes are supposed to be a bit lamely symbolic. The white over-shirt comes off revealing the black underneath.

    Thank you for your input! I appreciate it!
    • ArkillianDragon
      Dec 23, 2007, 9:07:27 PM UTC
      Hmmm- maybe if the black covered up to his neck like it was strangling him a little. If the girl was looking up at him, it'd be easier to get contact. She looks like she's glazing past his ankles right now. That's ok though, cause the hostility actually suits the over all mood here. They look like they're forced together for something. Maybe saving the world. There's also a slight hint in her body language that suggest a careing to him. or something. That all feel symbolic ^^ IT's a pretty picture anyways, so there's no need to over analyse it anyways ^^