Comment 67480

Comment ID 67480

[Art] Hart sketches
Humority
Mar 14, 2008, 12:02:18 PM UTC on [Art] Hart sketches
I really like the sketchiness and the facial expressionsGrin His face at the bottom has a nice contrast with the backgroundSmile

Replies

  • Jilly
    Mar 14, 2008, 4:53:37 PM UTC
    Thanks! yeah I really like how the face came out at the bottom Yes
    • Humority
      Mar 29, 2008, 7:49:03 AM UTC
      You're welcomeSmile I think you should work on your lineart a bit though. It is quite uneven. I hope you did well in that contestYes
      • Jilly
        Mar 29, 2008, 1:51:55 PM UTC
        Uneven like the sketch itself is disproportional or the line quality?? And I haven't heard anything yet from the contest. I think the first week of April is when we find out who's competing Yes
        • Humority
          Apr 4, 2008, 5:42:16 AM UTC
          Actually the bottom face is a kinda unproportional in the chin area. The others seem ok to meYes I believe the skecth would be even better if the lines would be smootherYes Hope you don't mind me critiquing. Good luck then...
          • Jilly
            Apr 5, 2008, 8:13:50 PM UTC
            Yeah I see what you mean. I don't mind critiques. If you ever see anything I could improve on don't hesitate to let me have XD