Comment 68204

Figured it'd be artistic liberty ^^

Donno- Its a bit hard to critique once you say that though, cause at theat point, you obviously know what your drawing, cause you're starting to break rules of proportions- right? Its a bit difficult to crit at that point cause I'd only be criting on personal opinion, and not how to make it better. Looking at art of him though, I think his eyes aren't rockstar enough, and his hair needs to be white. Maybe make a thing about it by making the background grey. He's got alot of angles on his face, so maybe if you make him look a little more gaunt? Specially around the eyes- the eyes is what makes him look young. The rest of him is ok. Give him depth under his eyes and that's a big starting point to hiting him on the head ^^ Otherwise, it's a tad difficult to roast, sorry ^^;