Comment 69429

Comment ID 69429

[Art] Slay
May 16, 2008, 8:21:31 AM UTC on [Art] Slay
Nice work! The coloring if well done, the pose is a little stiff and the way he is holding the sword looks awkward. I really like the highlights in the cape, the folds look very natural and flow well, giving a nice sense of movement. The skin tones could use a boost and well placed shadows will give the sense of musculature. Adding cast shadows where there is overlapping clothing will give a more realistic look, making it look less flat. Well done, thanks for sharing this with us. Smile

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  • May 16, 2008, 11:55:05 AM UTC
    Thanks for the critique. What you said really made my eyes open. I'll make sure to remember what you said next time when I do another picture ;D