Comment 74097

Parent Comment

Nov 11, 2008, 8:52:24 PM UTC
I like the concept of this! Anatomically it's pretty good, but watch out for her neck; it is very thick and short. Also her forearm is a bit too short and her hand too small. You put a lot of good detail and design into her costume. The folds in her shirt are well-done, but the ones in her skirt seem almost random.... I'd suggest using a reference. I like the technique you used to make the feathers fluffy Smile

Comment ID 74097

[Art] Snake Charmer
Nov 12, 2008, 4:49:47 PM UTC on [Art] Snake Charmer
I find the shading on the skirt in itself fine, but the ink lines area little messed I think. I got a little too heavy with the lines when I was inking.

And which forearm is a little too short? And I always have a problem with hands lol

And I'm glad you like the feathers. ^-^

Replies

  • Nov 22, 2008, 9:10:34 PM UTC
    The one supporting the snake is a tad too short... the other one's fine Smile
    • Nov 24, 2008, 3:32:42 PM UTC
      Ah, okay I see it now, It short of confused me because I was thinking the other one was to long lol