Comment 91831

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May 12, 2017, 4:19:48 AM UTC
The asymmetric look is very appealing, the curling plants add a nice whimsy feel to it. The stark white bit at the front is a bit jarring, but I take it that it's going to be colored in? Which would be a plus in my opinion. The trees and branches are done really well, you structured them well (it's a thing I have difficulty with myself, so you have my bit of admiration there!), and they aren't placed very closely, which keeps the piece from getting claustrophobic and helps maintain the open feeling of the whimsicalness. It might be just me, but I think it would help if you added something else to it, like maybe a bee or some small animal? I dunno, it just feels a little empty I suppose, but then again it might just be me.

Comment ID 91831

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May 17, 2017, 3:55:48 PM UTC on [Art] Blog header sketch
Thank you for the critique MaskedDragonNamedLin. I appreciate you taking the time to do that.

I agree adding some life would be good. I was thinking of adding fireflies and maybe a couple lizards.

i was thinking of adding a glowing rune as well. i'll experiment when i move to the color version.

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  • May 19, 2017, 6:27:09 AM UTC
    Your welcome, I'm glad I could make some good suggestions! Runes could also be interesting, that'll be fun to see.