Comment 95655

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Mar 13, 2020, 2:24:12 AM UTC
I'm sorry you feel lonely. It can be hard to go through life feeling so isolated. You do have your Paperdemon family here to support you though.

I see you requested a critique so here I am!
Welcome to Critique Thursday!

The cell shading style came out pretty well. I think my main comment would be about composition.
The characters are really close to the bottom edge of the composition which creates a sense of "tension" in the viewer which probably wasn't desired.

I suggest either adding more whitespace around the characters or cropping in closer on them. I'd also suggest using the "rule of thirds" to help you with your compositions.
https://www.slrlounge.com/glossary/rule-of-thirds-definition/
https://expertphotography.com/improve-your-composition-the-rule-of-thirds/

I hope this helps and let me know if you have questions!

Comment ID 95655

[Art] I am not Worth of Your Love
May 9, 2020, 9:58:23 PM UTC on [Art] I am not Worth of Your Love
Hello! I shamefully forgot to reply on this...!

Thank you for the kind words! I am happy you took time to critique my artwork :3

Thank you for the tips for the composition, I will definitely use them in the future!

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