Aaahhhhh! Bless you! This helps a lot :0 the only thing I'd say is that she is meant to be leaning on the staff she's a bit slouchy, but I've yet to define why she doesn't stand up straight.
Oops! I think you sent this same reply 8 other times. Anyhow that's alright. And sorry about that, I wasn't aware the staff-leaning was intentional. Tried to focus on balancing the pose.
Anyways you're always free to take away what you want from the critique image. Just happy to help!
And no you're good! :0 my poses tend to be stiff in the first place so this really helps!! Thank you!