If you wouldn't mind, I love good critique. I have some pages in the comic section here, some are pretty old but others are somewhat recent, I'll drop a link to make it easy. https://www.paperdemon.com/comics/about/534
I use a colored approach to pages, it appeals to me more than grey-scale (coloring is my favorite part of art, probably not a coincidence).
I've sent a PM- I hope it's not too much ^^; I didn't want to do it public cause I wanted it to be self contained, and free to talk casually about it. I hope I come across well ^^;