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Ushiwaka__Fullbody_by_Uchiha_Toukan

Ushiwaka - Fullbody

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Second Ushiwaka Drawing.  Used my own style for this one , its a bit more evident anyways.   P{hotoshop CS3. Tips appreciated.

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Submitted by: Uchiha Toukan

Posted: Mar 24, 2008 9:57 am

Completed: Mar 25, 2008

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Galleries: Cartoons, Fantasy, Finished Work, Landscapes, Misc Fanart (other)

Keywords: okami, ushiwaka, ushiwaka - fullbody

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Total Posts: 3

Mar 24, 2008 7:04 pm

It's quite a beautiful picture--the overlying designs of flowers are blended very gracefully with the blue of the water below, and the shading is absolutely gorgeous. I feel almost nasty nitpicking, but potluck it is . . .

The only critique I have to offer is that I think there's a weakness with the hands holding the flute; they appear flat and lifeless, with no real grace about them. (I myself have a huge amount of trouble with realistic hands. It really is a pain in the rear end, isn't it?) I think the beautiful coloring is disguising the anatomical issue, but not quite fixing it. The posture of the arms is also a bit static and flat. I think some time spent in front of a mirror, sketching, might help correct that.

But overall, those are minor issues. This really is a stunningly beautiful piece. Fabulous work!

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Uchiha Toukan  (Reply)

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Mar 24, 2008 8:37 pm

Your telling me , =] Hands ar emy nightmare. I didnt spend much time with the original sketch either and I will work on that. It definetly needs to be improved. But how is the question. Maybe a good tutorial. Thanks for the feedback!