Hey hon, you requested "Roast me" on this, so I thought I'd oblige
Some thoughts for improvement on the anatomy- I suggest looking up lounging in chair references on the net, and using simple shapes to maps out large masses of the body and how it interacts with the chair. It'll help make the limbs sit in a natural location, and help you learn how to draw the pose next time without a reference if you so wish to I hope that helps!
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Some thoughts for improvement on the anatomy- I suggest looking up lounging in chair references on the net, and using simple shapes to maps out large masses of the body and how it interacts with the chair. It'll help make the limbs sit in a natural location, and help you learn how to draw the pose next time without a reference if you so wish to I hope that helps!