Autumn Elf Face

Posted Dec 5, 2005, 9:16:23 AM UTC

Yeah finished this just now. I just took a little sketch I had done and gave it some color. Used text again to make borders. But I think next time I do it i will make the fonts smaller and do more letters so that it creates smaller shapes. The shapes in this one are too big and overpower the elf a little.

Anyway, do you think I should put this on products in the store?

Comments

Saiyangirl4ever
Dec 10, 2005, 11:14:17 AM UTC
Wow! Impressing! I like it1 The colors are great and the piccy looks very dreamy.Though it doesn`t look like an autumn elf to me. It`s more a dreamy elf..Eh,who cares! Great piccy susie! i love it!
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- BogusRed
  Dec 12, 2005, 7:37:02 AM UTC
  lol they are all dreamy hahaha.
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Jilly
Dec 5, 2005, 2:05:04 PM UTC
I think you should maybe add alittle more to it before you put it on any products that you have but it's a very beautiful pic and I like it alot. And I think I agree with you on the shapes they do overpower that little elf maybe tone them down alittle and it'd look less constricting on the elf.
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- BogusRed
  Dec 6, 2005, 12:46:20 AM UTC
  ok thanks for your input Jill
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Lilimayhem
Dec 5, 2005, 7:07:17 AM UTC | Total Edits: 1 | Last edited on Dec 5, 2005 by Lilimayhem
Hey Susie! I like it a lot and i agree with you the pattern seems a bit too big for the picture. But the drawing in itself is beautiful and simple...i could see it on shirt or i dunno a...geee...how is it called in english a pensil case?? Oh oh oh (no im not santa) i've just had an idea about that pattern you made, something was annoying me but i couldn't put my finger on it. I think i would be nice if you'd put transparence in it, i feel like it's too opaque. You know like draw the lines of the letter and such...
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- BogusRed
  Dec 6, 2005, 12:47:45 AM UTC
  Thanks Lili for the input. I'll try redoing the shapes/letters and making them smaller. I tried making them more transparent but I didn't like the look. I'll try softening the edges though so they aren't so harsh.
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  Lilimayhem
  Dec 6, 2005, 5:46:06 AM UTC
  i trust in yur judgement Susie! Will you be putting it in yur pd store? Have a nice day (its early here)
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  BogusRed
  Dec 6, 2005, 11:41:21 PM UTC
  Yeah, I'll make some revisions and probably put it on some products in the store.
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ArkillianDragon
Dec 5, 2005, 2:33:00 AM UTC
Posting it like this for the store- no... you're gonna have to do more to it. The only intersting part of this picture so far is your elf. The background, although it sort of compliments with the colour, is kinda boring. Also very frequently done by you Susie- I'm sorry hon, but the dreaming elf against the stars- It's really pretty, but you've done it quite a few times already. I'd like you to do something new with the pose, or do something different. No offence- I love your art, its just that there's no anticipationg for your next pics anymore. But maybe I'm missing some of them. I donno. Don't take it to heart to much though- I draw too much of my stuff too It happens- you know?
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- BogusRed
  Dec 5, 2005, 12:36:24 PM UTC
  yeah i guess i'm just trying to get a lot of drawings done in a hurry and not spending enough time on them. I am doing the same things over and over. Ah well, I'll see if I can come up with something different.
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  ArkillianDragon
  Dec 6, 2005, 2:04:25 AM UTC
  Glad to hear it ^^ I'm not sure what, but something new- maybe something that looks totaly different to your normal floaty stuff...
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