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This was my very first CG. Not too shabby bad for a first try. I'd hope to repost the newer version in due time. The bigest changes are the hair - more texture in the hair getting rid of the blockyness, iliminating the thick contour lines, and I got rid of the scary hands! Heh - funny how things change.
I'm no longer actively seeking crits for this image. However, if you have something to share please do.
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Submitted by: Sliverbane
Posted: Apr 28, 2004 12:39 am
Completed: unknown
Critiques (9)Galleries: Fantasy, Finished Work, Original Art
Keywords: cg, shaadiv, trugan, dremma, pleasure gorgon, demons, biseinen, demon, dremma devghan - color
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 BogusRedTotal Posts: 2850Apr 28, 2004 9:07 amSo is this the repost or the first try? I really love the hair! This is a great pic. The background is nice too. I also like the suttle shading on his body. I think it would have been better though if he wasn't so close to the edge of the paper (on the left, right, and top). If you are redoing it, just give some more space around the sides. --- |
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 Sliverbane (Reply)Total Posts: 279Apr 28, 2004 4:28 pmThis is actually a first try. I plan on reposting soon. I'm just looking for first impression and any need for improvements. I do agree the edges of the image are very close to him. Adding some space is certainly a must! --- Guano smells like a dirty sock full of old cheese and farts! - Gonard |
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 Jin WakaiTotal Posts: 21Jan 2, 2005 3:20 amOh yeah cuteness! |
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Sliverbane (Reply)Total Posts: 279Jan 5, 2005 8:17 pmThe hands need improvment in what way? --- Guano smells like a dirty sock full of old cheese and farts! - Gonard |
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Jin Wakai (Reply)Total Posts: 21Jan 15, 2005 2:12 amMake it more precise and with much more detail or manly looking... the fingers ain't much nice too look that's all but the rest is Cuteness... and totally yummy |
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Sliverbane (Reply)Total Posts: 279Jan 15, 2005 9:38 amWay ahead of you... I redesigned his hands a while back. ^_^ I'm working on coloring the new version. Perhaps I'll post the line art to the sketches gallery. --- Guano smells like a dirty sock full of old cheese and farts! - Gonard |
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 DennisTotal Posts: 984Apr 5, 2005 5:25 amWow, the shading and colors are realy well done and this is your first CG?! --- |
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Sliverbane (Reply)Total Posts: 279Apr 5, 2005 8:57 amYes, this was my first. Took me three days! I'm working on improving my techniques. --- Guano smells like a dirty sock full of old cheese and farts! - Gonard |
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 Lady Anime79Total Posts: 2839May 24, 2005 7:32 amThat's awesome. You did a great job on him. He looks pretty hot. *winks* You know, for a demon. *smiles* I especially love the subtle hint in the center of the flap. Ooh,la la. I really like the colors in the background. They flow so beautifully together. Great job. --- Laughter is the best medicine and your face is curing the world. |
