She is a little cross eyed. Only slightly. She looks like she's focussing on something right in front of her nose. If you separate the pupils out a little (Not to the center of the eye- slightly in from the center) it'll make it look like she's looking at something further away. Just as long as they aren't in the middle of the eye. Eyes always look inwards. You're not too badly out. It's better to be a little cross eyed than the opposite (I call it bug eyed- eyes looking outwards. That is BIZARRE to look at O.o )
She does seem crossed-eyed. It would look natural if she was blowing a big bubble of chewing gum though. The left pupil should be placed more to the left to make it look more natural.
Thanks for the suggestion, I think I'll try that...Or I could photoshop a bubble, turn it pink and place it over her mouth. Noone will no the difference
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