Thank you for the feedback and the comments. As for the artwork I've not been drawing long so it can only improve from here. The writing attached was something I butchered out of a more through backstories to grab the more important bits.
Once again thank you for the post and I'll be submitting the talisman shortly.
![[Art] Tablin Portrait](https://storage.googleapis.com/paperdemon-prod-la/submissions/thumbs/art_47073_thumb_7a7702e3dcdf9cc680c1b4f69141e66a61f640cb41a87.jpg)
Once again thank you for the post and I'll be submitting the talisman shortly.