Comment 12533

Comment ID 12533

[Art] The Traveller
karanakaou
Aug 17, 2005, 7:02:18 PM UTC on [Art] The Traveller
Oooo, so pretty, as always! I love the red touches in this, makes her seem alive. And I can definitely tell and appreciate the detail you placed in this, it really adds something special to it. The one thing that's throwing me off a little is the angle of her jaw. I don't know if it's because of the hair flying in front of her face, or if it's the jaw itself. But it seems a bit sharp to me. Other than that, this is very beautiful...and I still can't fathom how to do folds in material like you do...It's beyond me... Laughing

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  • Minimaid
    Aug 17, 2005, 8:05:35 PM UTC
    Yes, the sharpness of her jaw is accentuated by the hair - her jawline is actually underneath that wisp, if you look REALLY closely. :S But in all honesty, I wanted her to look a little exotic to the point where she's almost inhuman, so I didn't bother to fix that flaw when I was doing it. Does it bug you too much? These are erasable, so I could make the attempt at a remedy.

    My grasp of folds in material comes from dancing in the wind a lot while wearing loose flowing clothing... and watching children do the same. I do a lot of people-watching in all types of weather. ROFL
    • karanakaou
      Aug 17, 2005, 8:30:32 PM UTC
      How neat! Well, it's definitely a worthwhile technique; you've got those folds down COMPLETELY. And, I do think widening that lower part of the jaw will really tie this together. Don't hurt yourself fixing it though, because I still think it's beautiful. Smile
      • Minimaid
        Aug 17, 2005, 8:59:00 PM UTC
        Fixed! But it's going to be a little while before I upload it again. Tongue I'm working on Roth.
        • karanakaou
          Aug 18, 2005, 6:39:55 AM UTC
          Great! And that's cool...I'll just have to be patient. Upsidedown