Comment 33039

Comment ID 33039

[Art] Zarbon and Bulma WIP 2
Cokekitty
May 30, 2006, 7:18:36 AM UTC on [Art] Zarbon and Bulma WIP 2
Something about his left hand...it doesn't seem right. It doesn't really look like he's holding her. Like, wouldn't his fingers curve with her body more?

Other than that, it's very nice. Smile I can't wait to see it finished! Whee!

Replies

  • BogusRed
    Jun 3, 2006, 9:02:41 AM UTC
    yeah i need a red pen crit on the hand. I didn't want it to look too much like his other hand because it causes the twinning effect but i'm not really sure what else to do with it.
    • Cokekitty
      Jun 3, 2006, 10:35:20 AM UTC
      That, I'm afraid I can't help you with. Sweat Drop I got enough art smarts to see something's not quite right with it, but actually fixing it is a step above my current abilities. Laughing Sorry.
      • BogusRed
        Jun 3, 2006, 10:51:37 AM UTC
        Le sigh... Woe is me... For where art thou is a good red pen critic...