Comment 33502

Parent Comment

Cokekitty
May 30, 2006, 7:18:36 AM UTC
Something about his left hand...it doesn't seem right. It doesn't really look like he's holding her. Like, wouldn't his fingers curve with her body more?

Other than that, it's very nice. Smile I can't wait to see it finished! Whee!

Comment ID 33502

[Art] Zarbon and Bulma WIP 2
BogusRed
Jun 3, 2006, 9:02:41 AM UTC on [Art] Zarbon and Bulma WIP 2
yeah i need a red pen crit on the hand. I didn't want it to look too much like his other hand because it causes the twinning effect but i'm not really sure what else to do with it.

Replies

  • Cokekitty
    Jun 3, 2006, 10:35:20 AM UTC
    That, I'm afraid I can't help you with. Sweat Drop I got enough art smarts to see something's not quite right with it, but actually fixing it is a step above my current abilities. Laughing Sorry.
    • BogusRed
      Jun 3, 2006, 10:51:37 AM UTC
      Le sigh... Woe is me... For where art thou is a good red pen critic...