Comment 47057

This will be a two part crit. This is part 1

First thing- you've done a lovley job making this look like parchment. It's very rustic and lovely. A decrease in saturation would do it wonders for an authentic weathered look- I just tried it and it looks alot more traditional looking- if this was what you were going for with the parchment look.

Now- you wanted crit on her proportions. It's not all about that in this picture- attached to this crit is the red line of what your picture would have looked before you inked it. I'm not sure how human this fairy should look, so I'm not going to say that the undersized face is bad, but the neckis definetly too pushed back. The problems from here aren't proportions as much as she has an ackward position. Granted- she's hovering, but the mind's ee wants to see everything balanced. Perfect balance has half the body on either side of the head- if the body bends, some other part will compensate for it. in this, her body weight has no sence of gravity at all, and she looks tense with her head forward and body twisted. To be continued....